托福独立写作的评分细则
Effectively addresses the topic and the task——紧扣主题,别说废话(看懂题目是答题的步,有些同学连题目都没仔细看就开始答题,很容易出错,比如文章问should teachers be rewarded with incomes comparable to those of doctors, lawyers, and business leaders,有些同学没看清comparable to是"比得上、差不多"的意思,而错误地理解成了"相比较(compare with)",于是整篇跑题;好不要使用模板,因为模板基本全是废话,考官阅文无数,火眼金睛,看到模板会非常反感。使用模板进行写作完全属于初级的段数,对于拿到没有明显帮助,如果使用不当,反而会起反效果。)
Is well organized and well developed, using appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details--逻辑严密、内容充实(文章段中的内容要和中间段对应,所有中间段的主题句应完美支持段的主旨,不可以出现反效或无效论述;段落中要有必要的解释和例子,例子里面要有细节。)
Displays unity, progression, and coherence--文章连贯,有整体感
Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrate syntactic variety,appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors--语言熟练,句法多样,用词准确,偶有小错(能够熟练地使用英语进行表达,句式要富于变化,能够准确地选择并使用词汇,偶尔的且不影响意义表达的语法和拼写错误允许存在)
总而言之,借用考试时大家会听到的一句话,this section measures your ability to use writing to communicate in an academic environment,该部分是考查学生在学术环境中运用写作进行沟通的能力,考查的核心是communication skill。